All in all, I really like this design, and from what you say about Jenna and her designs in your description, I think you've done a good job summing up her/her style with this logo.

As far as your a and r problems in "bear", maybe try connecting the e to the r, as the a and r connect in "boards"? Just a thought.

Is the flourish taken directly from Nymphette? Just curious because some parts of it don't seem as even/smooth as the rest of the type/lines in this piece. If you haven't edited it at all I would recommend just smoothing it out a little, getting rid of any unnecessary anchor points for your final draft.

If you have edited it, or if there aren't any extra anchor points, etc., then I am seeing things. Oh well.

I didn't mark this as high on originality as I would have liked to, purely because it reminds me so much of another logo I can't quite place. I'm sure it's nothing you had in mind when creating this, but I just get a really strong sense that I've seen this logo before when I look at it. Logo deja vu? Eh, maybe it's the water park feeling.

All in all, great color scheme, nice flow through the text. It's bold and eye catching without being blocky or boring.

The E and A are really far apart there's just this strange stretch there also the top and bottom of the R don't look like its lining up from where its cut off by the A.

Also I didn't realize that was a J in the beginning til I had a second look at it. I'm also not too keen on having the B circle (insert professional Typographical term here) be filled in with a color, though I do think it works with the A.

Love the colors and the gradient also the font, reminds me of a theme or water park.